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Brackenheart sat beside the churning black river in the dead of night. A slight crack could be heard behind him, like a branch breaking underpaw. He flicked his ears in the direction, his head turning after, too, as he sat up. His piercing ice blue eyes, and black fur made him look like a shadow with two shiny orbs.
Ok... I guess that fine
He blinked. Barely moving, holding his posture. The shecat didn't scare him, or waver him, but there was a distinct sort of, air, about her.
"Perhaps I have, depends, I guess, why you are on Riverclan territory."
He replied steadily knowing that the cats air under the water would soon run out. He stood up from his sitting position and walked closer to the group of cats and then to their apparent leader.
(please excuse any errors,its very late and Im somewhat tired, but restless. And its alsowhy the entry is short)
So Im working on this story, hopefully it'll be an active story, Im having fun working on it. Please review my kitties, and ask away too, Ill give shoutouts to my first five reviews and answers to some questions.
| CHAPTER ONE |
A warm breeze swept over my black fur in the dead of the green-leaf night. Sneaking past the four great oaks where the full moon shone brightly into the noisy clearing, I swept around it clearing my territory boundaries.
Riverclan scent.
I was over the line, I knew I was. But I had a mission. I found my way along the black river to their camp before the moon was even at its peak. The gathering would officially start soon. Plenty of time.
As I snuck around the camp edges I smelt and listened into the thin bushes, until I found the quietest, thickest bramble. Smelling of milk and dew. I took tooth and claw to that bush and pulled apart a small section very silently. It broke easily regardless of the layers and thorns under my talon sharp claws.
Sliding through the gap I enter what is obviously the Nursery. A single large cat lies there. As a dark figure in the small den, I step up behind the cat. Doing a single half circle around the obvious mother, I find to kits. A tom with shining silver fur, and a smaller white she-cat with the most beautiful white fur. These kits were easily new born.
The plan was ruined. I was supposed to kill the pregnant queen while the gathering took place, but her kits were born.
It doesn't take my brain to form a new plan, and an explanation to why I have the kits.
I will steal them.
I shall tell Crackedstar the whole story. He will surely understand that his kin must be taken home if not killed before birth. I must follow through with my order regardless. I unsheath my claws, the ivory colour gleaming in the dull moonlight.
And its over. She's dead. My deed is done.
Picking up the kits by their scruffs in mt mouth and the she-cat with my claws. I pull them all into the night. I pelt to the river, and im halfway across the stepping stone, and I let her go, the body sinks into the churning, black water and I rush off, home, to my clan.
PLEASE FILL OUT A FORM TO GET A CHARACTER IN THE STORY
I need 3-5 kits and 3-4 loners / kittypet /rouge
Name
Age
Gender
Backstory(for kittypet/rouge/loner)
Looks
Thanks kittens!
Oh, yes I know what that like. My friends fall asleep alot when we text and such, so its perfectly okay if any circumstance like that happens or whatever.
Its been a week, maybe more since I found out she was pregnant. It had to happen eventually, but, Im still in shock. Its been half a year since she told me, my aunt, my only mother figure, who I also hadn't seen for years before then. I don't wanna lose her, but she has a life now, and will soon have a family, but who can I ask help from? i don't know any of these kids, Im a new student, its so hard to make friends when everyone thinks your depressed and emo...
so basically, im new at school and I just want a friend to confide in but things excalate really fast.
(whoops sorry, i was working on a story)
He thought for a moment.
"Im no leader, just a regular warrior, to tired to sleep, if that makes sense. Yah, I've seen her, who would miss her, those eyes......" he hesitated. "Cant recall which way she went exactly, i think across the river into Thunderclan territory. Maybe up the river." Hr backed away from her now. Keeping his gaze steady upon her. He looked her up and down noticing the obvious fearlessness that most cats failed near him.
Ive added clan to the form, please update the form, this way I know.
Also anyone who reads this, don't be afraid to review, give feedback, or suggestions for future chapters, I get writers block alot ao it WILL help, thanks again!
"Oh!" Tori stumbled and fell into a locker and then to the ground. "Uh, oh, sorry!" She stuttered and ran away, slightly off balance and almost in tears. She locked herself into a bathroom stall, put her face into her hands and just sat there. She had no energy to cry. Her black hair framed her face like it was natural, but she cuts it herself every month. It became a mess. Her natural black hair. She then took a comb from her bag and heard the door open, and footstep come near. She lifted her feet onto the toilet seat and covered her mouth wishing to be unseen.
I hope you don mind
5, 6, 7 ;)
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She looked at the girl and put her hand out "Yah.. Im fine... Just hit my arm." she explained shyly. She stood up and pushed a strand of her unevenly cut hair behind one ear and then left the stall "Im Tori, by the way." She pulled a notebook out of her bag, quickly scanning the page, then shutting it and stuffing it back into her messenger bag that's covered with patches and pins.
(i do, but i don't like to give out my phone number, but if you have kik messenger my username is the same as on here)
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Brackenheart sat outside the leaders den. Awaiting his return. Hr had horrible, but amazing news, he did not think his leader would like the news, but he was ecstatic.
(leader, mate from other clan, and kits needed, and other cats)
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"Its just my journal. Extremely private. I never let anyone read it." She cough as she inhaled the smoke. It wasn't entirely bad when she did.. She pulled down her sweater sleeves and put her hand out to take the cigarette. "Ya, Ill try it" She knew at that moment that a downward spiral might begin. But she simply pushed it out of her mind and inhaled the cigarette, holding it and then blowing out again. She shut her eyes as the taste settled on her tongue and decided, she liked it.
also i don't have snapchat
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"Geez Drea, I feel like I've known you for years.... How did you get this stuff?"
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Gorsetoe
Male
Grey and brown with white tail tip.
One bling eye, one deaf ear
Gorse toe saw the she-cat. He tapped her with his tail on her back, and smiled kindly and lifted a paw in greeting
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Sandwave is a handsome, well built, cream and tan tabby tom-cat. He has his whole life ahead of him, and wants to start a family. He is hard to get to because he doesn't want false love but, if he says he loves you, he means it. He has never said it to a single soul, and isn't about to do it lightly.
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Pebblestream
Calico
Female
Is a kindhearted cat, who works hard and does her best. She is outgoing, and brave, balanced with excitement.
She has never had an apprentice before, but is an experienced cat, with alot of skill in water. (And almost the exact opposite of Tigeclaw XD)
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He tries to explain that he wants to show her something, and uses his tail to make her stand up "Come with me" He mouths, knowing she is deaf, and hoping shell understand
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forgot to mention he's Windclan
Dustwave sat in a patch of brownish grass with a hint of emerald green. He lay, quite relaxed when he heard a small movement to his right. A rabbit poked his head out, looked up and bolted away. Sandwave was up faster than you could say 'Windclan' and chased down the rabbit, suddenly a flash of fur, the rabbit was gone, and a few long grass prices were broken around him. He growled, "Show yourself, that was my prey!"
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